Introduction
Welcome to today's lesson! Please watch the following video and follow the instructions given in each section of this WebQuest.
Task
Instructions:
Read the following passage and list SEVEN reasons that can be used to advertise Zwelihle to people wanting to move to the Cape.
1. Your summary must be written in point form.
2. List your SEVEN 7 points in full sentences, using no more than 70 words.
3. Number your sentences - 1 to 7.
4. Write only one point per sentence.
5. Use your OWN words as far as possible.
6. Indicate the number of words used in brackets at the end of your summary.
Zwelihle – what makes it such a special place?
If you are looking for a delightful place to raise a family, then it is sometimes important to research the area before considering a move. There is one option that could be considered, viz. the Overberg region which is situated in the Western Cape. One place to consider could be Zwelihle.
Zwelihle is next to the sea. That is the beauty of it. The Atlantic Ocean is right on the doorstep of Zwelihle.Here people can stroll next to the sea or catch fish.
Although the town developed rather quickly, it is also close to all the necessary shopping centres. This is a huge advantage because all essential shops are within walking distance. On weekends the shops at Gate Way and the Whale Coast Mall are crowded with people doing their grocery shopping.
Education is important. Zwelihle PS and Qhayiya SS are just two of the schools that serve the growing need for basic education. Qhayiya SS is an oversubscribed school and the classes service many learners. However, dedicated teachers, such as Ms Mdoda, are concerned and motivated to the task of educating the learners. Qhayiya SS is proud to report that in 2017 there was a pass rate in Grade 12 of over 83%.
As you approach Zwelihle, you notice the soccer fields which form part of the Zwelihle recreational facilities. Here there are important matches played during weekends and sometimes during weekday afternoons. There are other recreation features in the area such as swimming, surfing, diving and hiking (Hoy’s Koppie). Such activities keep you fit and healthy.
An aspect that is often taken for granted is that of infrastructure and service provision, such as roads, electricity, water and waste removal. Zwelihle forms part of the Overstrand Municipality which has to ensure that these services are available. The stability of such services makes the area secure to live in. Unfortunately, there is a housing crisis which will hopefully be resolved.
The Zwelihle residents have the reputation of being exceptionally friendly. The friendliness can be seen by the positive attitude of the residents and their willingness to assist wherever they can. A Zwelihle smile is famous in the Hermanus region. The mountains play a role in making the climate of this area unique. The climate is ideal for residents of the ZwelihleHermanus region. It plays a critical role in ensuring that the people of this region are amongst the healthiest in the world.
Process
Writing a summary and using summarizing skills:
SUMmarize It
Shorter than the text
Use your own words
Main ideas only
SUMMARISING:
A summary is a simplified, condensed account. You will be required to reduce a given extract to a certain number of words.
- Only the main points are required
- Eliminate unnecessary information such as repetition, explanation, descriptions and quotations.
- By using your own words, you will indicate that you understand the passage.
- This is a reported statement and is therefore written in the past tense and in reported speech.
TECHNIQUES FOR SUMMARISING:
- Read the passage carefully in order to gain a general overview of the content
- Reread the passage and underline the key sentence in each paragraph. This is often the first sentence of the paragraph and what follows merely substantiates it.
- List these main points. You may prefer to use your own words, but keep the context intact.
- Write the first draft of the summary by combining these ideas in a logical sequence.
- Reread the draft and remove any unnecessary words or information e.g. adjectives and adverbs.
- Count the words.
- Add or omit words or phrases in order to produce a succinct and condensed version of the original.
- Edit your summary for spelling or grammatical errors.
- Supply a short title if necessary.
- Rewrite your final draft carefully, checking that you have used your own words.
- State the number of words in a bracket just below your summary.
Watch the following video on how to write a summary and what not to do when writing a summary.
Watch the following video on how to find key words when reading a passage. It will be of great use when writing a summary.
Evaluation
The following is a rubric/marking guideline for marking your summary. Please follow the guidelines to ensure that you obtain full marks.
Marking Guidelines:
Quote: Own Words:
| Zwelihle is next to the sea | ...close to the sea... |
| close to all the necessary shopping centres |
...within easy walking distance to shops... ...easy to get to shops... |
| Education is important |
There are schools to cater for education Education is essential/vital/... |
| There are recreational facilities |
Numerous recreational services... A number of fun/leisure activities... |
| Infrastructure and service provision |
Infrastructures is there... Services are provided... |
| Exceptionally Friendly | Very friendly/welcoming/pleasant/kind |
| The climate is ideal |
Climate is beneficial to health... Climate is perfect/ the best... |
Mark Allocation:
- 7 marks for 7 points (1 mark per point)
- 3 marks for language
Distribution of language marks when candidate has not quoted verbatim:
- 1-3 points correct award 1 mark
- 4-5 points correct award 2 marks
- 6-7 points correct award 3 marks
Distribution of language marks when candidate has quoted verbatim:
- 6-7 quotes: award no language mark.
- 1-5 quotes: award 1 language mark.
Conclusion
This lesson is to help you prepare for your end of term language test. Please take time in figuring out how to write a summary, it is the easiest marks to obtain in a language test. You can go over the notes and video links again if needed. Your summary is due in 5 days on the 20th of August 2021.
Good luck.
Credits
Reading Passage and Rubric: https://wcedeportal.co.za/eresource/97516
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